I love the randomness of it all, but better yet, how nothing in the image makes it feel random. Rainbow Dash has determination in her face, as if she knows exactly why she is there and why she wheres a fez and why no ones letting her eat her damn sandwich. As for what could be improved, there are a few things. Something about the way she is standing seems awkward, possibly because her left foot curves inward instead of outward? A simple change would be to make her hoof in the air or in mid-stride, as this would not only solve that problem, but give the scene a better sense of immediacy. I only say that because the sandwich being held in her mouth and the fact that she hasn't stepped through the door more than a foot already convey that sense of immediacy. Also maybe try adding comic-book style action lines to ramp up the excitement.
Just like I said in the description. To elaborate, I did a request livestream towards the beginning of the year, and I got a request to draw "Rainbow Dash with a fez, a sandwich, and a large quantity of bullets." This is the result.
Cool, but I meant the backstory behind the drawing and what would lead to Rainbow Dash to have to burst into a house, wearing a fez, guns blazing and apparently in the middle of her lunch break.
I imagine the explanation behind that would be quite the read.
Anyways, this is going in my favorites, and job well done.
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